The Front Design The bear-head is very appealing. I crave for the contrast of colours but I would prefer not to extend the dotted line beyond the head. Perhaps the outer borderline of the head can be softened a little [e.g. using a slightly thicker line with a gradual fade in colour] I think this will bring out the subject more ... In terms of the "half :mask bear" font, I think it could be improved if you can change the font style to something more interesting [sth like the tinker toy font???] .... ------------------------------------ The Back Design Does the HZ and the lines have some meanings? I would hope to see a stronger connection to what's in the front... Or should the half-mask bear phrase be moved to hear instead? ------------------------------------ Overall I will definitely buy it if its on sale coz I love it!!!
It's very simple. I like the scheme of colours used, but not the dotted line in the middle. :S The back logo/image could use more creativity?
ReplyDelete...Man, I'm a tough critic. I know I can't do a better job haha. Good work for a first t-shirt design though!
i m 17+ and im a girl, i feel that the t-shirt is really nice, and i like the mask bear design, it's super cute~~good job^^
ReplyDeleteI like the design... but i reckon maybe for the word half, u can do something more to it?
ReplyDeleteI really like the design of the back though. simple and nice
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The Front Design
ReplyDeleteThe bear-head is very appealing. I crave for the contrast of colours but I would prefer not to extend the dotted line beyond the head. Perhaps the outer borderline of the head can be softened a little [e.g. using a slightly thicker line with a gradual fade in colour] I think this will bring out the subject more ...
In terms of the "half :mask bear" font, I think it could be improved if you can change the font style to something more interesting [sth like the tinker toy font???] ....
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The Back Design
Does the HZ and the lines have some meanings? I would hope to see a stronger connection to what's in the front... Or should the half-mask bear phrase be moved to hear instead?
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Overall
I will definitely buy it if its on sale coz I love it!!!
Love the design, you should make it!
ReplyDelete9/10. im in love with it.
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